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Pines

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September 11, 2014
Pines by The-Story-Spinner is excellent nature poetry: vivid, uncluttered, and bearing the gift of a subtle, thoughtful message.
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Suggested by OfOneSoul
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The pines bend over

Crooked

Dark against a satin sky

Old and wind-twisted

Weary of winter

of going on

They stretch in a sweet spring sun

Stretch, straighten, and start over

pale new needles poke

out of paper-crisp wrappings

tender and soft

having never seen a winter


Another old poem. Please tell me what you think.

Edit: I got a DD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow. I'm in shock right now. Thank you to everyone who took the time to read this. Thank you to OfOneSoul for suggesting this. You are all amazing, and I'm honored. 
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